I Knew What I Had to do: How Kylo Ren was (Almost) Ruined pt. 3

MAJOR SPOILERS AHEAD. DON'T READ IF YOU HAVEN'T SEEN THE MOVIE YET.
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My previous two blog posts (part one and part two) I explained how the reveal of Kylo Ren as the son of Han and Leia could have been a more compelling story filled with a mystery by slightly altering the dialogue. Here is a visual outline of how that would play out.